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He brought us to a big room full of people. He took me to my seat and he brought my sister to a other table on the opposite side of the room. "We found 2 new people. The boy over there is Justin and his sister Riley." He screams out to everybody. One man looked at me and said. "Welcome stranger." I replied with "Hello."
"To see if we can trust Justin, who seems to be the most threatning, and some voluntier to go." Then this young fellow got up and said "I'll do it" "Okay you and Justin will wake up in the morning and go." I said okay and he send my sister and I to a small hut to sleep in. "Can we get these bindings off please?" I ask. "Not till tomorrow morning." He said. He closes the door and locks it. I look at my sister to see her crying as if she knew we are in trouble. "Look I'll be alright. I promise everything is fine." I said. "... Pleas be carefull." She replied. "I will." | |
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Site Owner Posts: 170 |
Cool. | |
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-- poetry in motion - Tear
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Member Posts: 110 |
Oh yes trust me. I already wrote the whole 6 chapters. I am hoping this is good. This is my first time writing something and showing something. | |
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Site Owner Posts: 170 |
Sweet! Tip: The best thing about writing is going back and seeing your past stories and learning how to improve in future writings. | |
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-- poetry in motion - Tear
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You see I havent wrote anything in a while. The last thing I wrote was Fan Fiction of "The Walking Dead" I took parts of that story into this. | |
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